Eeeeee's manga / #Funny(72)

Aaaa sad it's not completed... But it's a little awkward and stupid lmao, they're so naive... Also the family issues fr, awkward. Plot is a bit all over the place

A bit too tame yet too extreme all at once, how odd it is to write that LOL. It confuses me a bit that the dom is like "I wanna destroy you devil emoji", yet is so sweet and caring IRL. It's nice he keeps in mind MC's hesitation though, they take it slow, but we are 2 volumes in and I still feel like they're at that same space of hesitance. At times I doubted if their relationship truly is as healthy as people described. Sure there are green flags, but it still seemed to manage to rub me a bit wrong with the actions at times... Especially the piercing scene, I was hoping the dom would respect him and do something else but this bitch betrayed him GR. But the beginning sex panels were pretty damn hot, though also a bit rushed for their dynamic. Their sweet moments are healing though, I love that. But yeah, I got a bit uncomfortable, despite it's many good parts too. Unfortunately there are not many manga's out there who can make me feel fully comfortable, after all. I love the art though, literally to be eaten up. Yum. Looking forward to volume 3. Also I felt like the author is forced to keep the mind reading in since it's the main premise, but the text repeats at times and I feel you author, maybe you just want to get rid of it. I have that too with my own writing at times