Sheerluck31's manga / #reincarnation(7)

Well, I really like the story. I like the characters, I like their interactions and how they build and grow. I just think that they went from one genre to another a bit. I mean... suddenly there are magical creatures, magic/legendary weapons, demons and gods. To me the change wasn't really smooth. There were no clues scattered or hints. It suddenly went from the blacksmith saying he saw a magic/mystic weapon, to meeting an legendary creature and soon enough there were demons and immortals. Although he did reincarnate, so SOME magic or divine power could have been involved.

This is such a cliche it borders on boring. The plot can be seen a thousand miles away. The villains not only discuss their plans with their underlings in the middle of a ball (not on a locked chamber, not on a hidden place - but literally on a huge open spot were anyone can pass by), they also give a step by step explanation on what they did and what they plan to do and how the MC ruined their plans. The MCs worries are... very superficial. Well, sometimes she worries about how the ML will work as a king. But that's about it. No plans, no thinking. If you want to jump headfirst to immerse yourself on this story... be careful because it is shallow as a puddle. I'd give the MC a mental age of 6. Nevermind she was a grown working woman before the reincarnation.

Hahahaha. Well, a wonderful story about a cute, pure, low self esteem, clumsy, stupid stalker (FL) - with no redeeming features outside her artistic's representations of her victim who accidentally "kidnaps" the all powerful, rich, strong, beautiful, amazing in every single aspect Arch Duke ML (by manner of ignoring the privacy and advice of her friend and breaking something very important for her friend's research - so add shitty friend to the list of FL qualities). The proposed plot? How will she deal with the repercussions of the kidnapping and the clear evidence of the stalking? Spoiler The plot twist? There was no kidnapping. He went willingly because he was watching her for years until she became legal so he can marry her. He knew of her stalking and found it cute. There is no plot. Just cutesy stereotypical romance with a DUMB incompetent FL and all powerful ML. Perfect for anyone who is too exhausted to think and just wants pretty art.

So far it seems incredible. I need more chapters.