Sheerluck31's manga / #Fantasy(5)

Well, I really like the story. I like the characters, I like their interactions and how they build and grow. I just think that they went from one genre to another a bit. I mean... suddenly there are magical creatures, magic/legendary weapons, demons and gods. To me the change wasn't really smooth. There were no clues scattered or hints. It suddenly went from the blacksmith saying he saw a magic/mystic weapon, to meeting an legendary creature and soon enough there were demons and immortals. Although he did reincarnate, so SOME magic or divine power could have been involved.

This is such a cliche it borders on boring. The plot can be seen a thousand miles away. The villains not only discuss their plans with their underlings in the middle of a ball (not on a locked chamber, not on a hidden place - but literally on a huge open spot were anyone can pass by), they also give a step by step explanation on what they did and what they plan to do and how the MC ruined their plans. The MCs worries are... very superficial. Well, sometimes she worries about how the ML will work as a king. But that's about it. No plans, no thinking. If you want to jump headfirst to immerse yourself on this story... be careful because it is shallow as a puddle. I'd give the MC a mental age of 6. Nevermind she was a grown working woman before the reincarnation.

So far it seems incredible. I need more chapters.