Comadrin's manga / #Pitiful(2)

That was really sad. Unfortunately, the writers had about as much talent as the supposed clothes designer in their story, which is to say, none.

Another plot with more holes than a wool scarf in a moth colony. For the Lord's sake, learn a little about the era you're writing about, and STOP DRAWING MODERN REVOLVERS IN REGENCY ERA ENGLAND!!!! And what kind of flaming moron would try to die because his obsessive idiot of a mother only loved her other son and made him promise. His head might as well be filled with blancmange.