I liked the story, but Crikey he was full of himself. She's obviously upset and scared of something, and within minutes of meeting her, he wants to know every secret she's ever had and keeps on and on pressing her. Then when he does find out (and it's nothing disgusting or shameful) he pouts like a little boy over the fact that she didn't tell him. SINCE WHEN WAS IT ANY OF HIS G*% D#$N BUSINESS??? As I've noted before, the vast majority of Harlequin MLs think that manners are for untermenschen and not for them.
His Christmas Eve Proposal