Mitchthehawk's manga / #Swimming(2)

8/9--as a oneshot this was really well executed and told a full story. I wish this was a series on its own it was very sweet and pretty

6--this was disappointing. The seme was awesome but the uke getting casaully assaulted and seemingly being unbothered and then he ends up giving up his dream and letting the alpha get the glory which went against the whole purpose of the beginning was unfortunate