Mitchthehawk's manga / #One Shot(181)

7--kinda cute for a one shot

7--for a one shot this had a pretty developed story. The uke was kind of a herk but the seme was really mature

7/8--for a oneshot the story is pretty developed of course i wish it wss longer and we got to see what happened after both confessed their feelings

6--meh the couple was already together but it dis give quite a lot of background for a oneshot

8/9--as a oneshot this was really well executed and told a full story. I wish this was a series on its own it was very sweet and pretty

4--im a little confused about the beginning. Had he been randomly sucking guys off or was he waiting round to try it and that was his first time? Kind messed up and not cute

7- short pretty much all about sex but kinda funny

8--its too bad this wasn't a series it was interesting as a one shot