Mitchthehawk's manga / #Omegaverse(70)

5--i was really disappointed in this story. It had a lot of potential but the plot was all over the place and the seme was so hypocritical and wishy washy. He wanted to protect the uke but slept with him in the beginning and was a jerk constantly. Just didnt like it. It wasnt sweet and they decided not to become mates but partners

7--the seme was really nice but the uke looked almost like a woman at times plus they didnt have enough interactions or something. Their relationship just seemed off

6/7--i was kinda worried this whole story thta it was going to end badly or that the uke would choose the younger brother. I still really didnt like the uke in the end as i think his personality still needed to come out. The seme was kinda scary but still really wonderful to the uke. This was a very complicated story.

6/7--it was okay, not really romantic to me but it was sort of cute cause the uke was a little ditzy ane random things happened. The seme was a bit shallow and it never explained how he hadn't noticed his feelings for the uke even though they were friends for a long time

4--so this started off interesting and had potential however it went down this path where it revealed how messed up the seme was. He sabotaged all the ukes past relationships and marked his girlfriends. Still even after they reconnected he was sleeping with multiple people. So how devoted are you exactly? Just didnt like the way it ended up

5/6--this was kind of a weird story and some of the relationships seemed a little off. This ended up being a lot of smut with a sorta kinda plot. I didnt really like all the interelated relationships either. You liked my dad, i like you, but you ended up liking my child. Ha

6/7--this was better than i expected. Even though the seme top was a lottle forceful he did have genuine feelings for the other. The ending was a little unfinished as they werent officially together and i wished they would have bitten each other. This needs anoter volume

6--this story was really angsty because the whole thing is a discussion of whether instict or real love is controlling their feelings for each other which is a question i never really like in omegaverse

7--for being a two shot this was a pretty cute story. It did skip over them first having sex whixh was kind of weird but otherwise it was fairly developed

8-- the seme came off as a huge jerk most of the time but you could see he cared in some of the stuff he did, it just annoyed me that he did a 180 at the end by proposing. I felt bad for the uke because he needed more reassurance and self esteem boost