Mitchthehawk's manga / #Older Seme(14)

5-- the feelings from the seme weren't explained and the whole scandal was confusing

7--cute seme and uke relationship, I didn't like how the seme kept saying he was in love with the uke' father till close to the end. Plus the creepy old lecher guy >:(

8--even though it was slow and there weren't really any love confessions I liked it for some reason. I guess it seemed more realistic in a way hmmm

5--the story was a lot more angsty than it was cute, I wasn't expecting the older seme to have had a wife and kid that died he seemed so carefree right at the beginning. I think it was too much with the plot of having the Uke traumatized because of his broken promise as a kid. Not my cup of tea.

9--this story was adorable to read, like so fluffy and cute. The only drawback is how quickly they get together and the straight seme wants to touch the uke. Like literally right after they meet. It would have been nice if the into would have been drawn out longer. Otherwise so great

8--the seme is great, but the uke is a little angsty. I'm not a super big fan of an age gap where there is an actual middle aged guy. However this was pretty hot just because the seme is really passionate anyway

6--this story was funny but very cringey because it was basically a parody of a gay guy trying to find romance like a yaoi manga. So it was clever but awkward at the same time

7-- this was an interesting concept but it needed more backstory, plus more about when Yuki met Godai. Some things disnt get communicated well. However they were cute when they were bickering with each other and living together. After finding out everyone's true motives it comes across more sweet than angsty

6-- mostly smut again. This had kinda a weird plot with a large age gap. He idolized his mom's friend and wanted to always grow up and be his chick so he seduces him but doesn't even understand that he loves him till he almost gets raped *sigh*

8/9--so the age gap wasn't a great aspect as the author could have made him 20 and in university just as easily as still in high school. Plus the seme was a little lusty after him for being so young. However they were really adorable together and I love a size gap. The seme also was fairly respectful and didn't push the kid. It would have been nice to get more of the uke's perspective though. I smiled several times while reading this though