Mitchthehawk's manga / #Alpha x Omega(18)

7--cute but the uke having such admiration for the other omega distracted from the feelings between the actual couple. I think that would be an interesting alternate story. The seme didn't get developed enough either

5--basically the whole story was a drawn out misunderstanding about them not realizing each other's feelings, definitely disappointing

6--meh it wasnt very cute and i didnt like the seme much

7/8--it was cute but kind of shallow and not as sweet as i would have hoped. It didnt really let their feelings develop they were just instantly in love, i guess it was the fated pairs thing but even that it kind of glossed over

6/7--i was kinda worried this whole story thta it was going to end badly or that the uke would choose the younger brother. I still really didnt like the uke in the end as i think his personality still needed to come out. The seme was kinda scary but still really wonderful to the uke. This was a very complicated story.

7--for being a two shot this was a pretty cute story. It did skip over them first having sex whixh was kind of weird but otherwise it was fairly developed

8-- the seme came off as a huge jerk most of the time but you could see he cared in some of the stuff he did, it just annoyed me that he did a 180 at the end by proposing. I felt bad for the uke because he needed more reassurance and self esteem boost

8--things happen kind of fast in the beginning but at least the bite was consensual. This wasnt super romantic as the uke was a tsundere but it showed a lot of his character development and accepting himself. So it was still a nice story just not super fluffy

6/7--honestly in the beginning i almost stopped reading this because i thought the alpha was going to be a douchebag but he progressively got better and in the end was actually pretty caring and sweet. The twins were annoying though but their own story would be interesting and much more dark i bet

6/7--the seme's attitude changed a little too quickly for me and even though the uke did develop feelings for the seme he still used his pheromones to trap him when he could have told the truth. I'm glad they had a cute future together and were able to have a kid