Meng Shi Zai Shang
This obsession of the male lead with the main character is just... he's advancing towards a 6 and later a 11 y.o. and the author portrays that as if it's natural and ok and I don't even know how to express, like... I don't care if he's only 4 years older than her, it doesn't make it ok. Their relationship and also the "heroic" disposition of the ML feels kinda forced to me, I don't know, their dinamics just make me really unconfortable. Oh, and there's also that annoying cliché where the ML is just breathing, but just that is enough to make all females in 500m fall in love.
Lamia Orphe is Dead
This is kinda nonsensical, I didn't read everything nor do I have the intention to anymore, but if she's so intent on changing places with her brother, why does she keep hoarding all the businesses/responsibilities and doesn't even let him be present on discussions/happenings? He may not be prepared yet or even have the capabilies, but locking him in his room is just cutting every potentiality he may have (and only strenghtens her power in the eyes of their subordinates). Also, the whole thing with both princes, the hand, and even the time progression (it's like the author goes back and forth on time and doesn't let the reader know) is all very confusing.
Shen Yi Di Nu