cmdrbanger's manga / #Fashion(3)

It's cute and sweet and doesn't have any gay panic! I just wish the art wasn't so stiff. It's looser and fits better when scenes have a comedic tone, but the serious and romantic scenes all pretty much feel the same, and have an awkward posed look.

Ehhhh everything just *happens*. It's fluffy, but the shy guy switching to being confident and forward in the relationship feels so contrived. Not very satisfying, and the drama happens so rapidfore too.

I mean... It has a happy ending but it's kinda lame. Especially for a oneshot, they just never use their words and it all resolves in the last couple pages. Meh.