lenaGRonyx's manga / #softyaoi(75)

|Chapter 10|

["Hitorijime Boyfriend" - "Hitorijime My Hero"] |Chapte 17| I like it, better than the other manga, and they are sooooo cute <3

*fuck this shit im out* Wwaaaaaah, there's no happy end!!

|Chapter 27|

The story and the couple wasn't bad but man, seriously there are a lot of unexplicated things... How and why Jun traveled time; also why not: how life was for the guys in the past after the death/disparition of their king; why are there people in the present who look exactly like some of the people from the past and what happened to Shiwoo's brother?... Just too much

|Chapter 159 - Dropped| Too light while processing heavy plot/event, seems like the author can't make a decision and changes his mind all the time, poorly written, too much translation errors, not enough research/experience with a lot of subjects, and I waited a bit of explanation for the hermaphrodite but seems like it wasn't planned (and censored for some reason)

I don't know if it's intended (well I think not) but they fell in love too fast, too hard and seems without a reason but with their nightmares and time travel, it looked like they fell hard because the time travel, because in the futur they already loved each other and so already lived their love. I liked the idea, the logic behind and the chaos it would bring.

|Chapter | Looked forward but disappointerd, still it's beautifully written (looks like someone with life experience) --Chap2: That is the first chinese comic that looks well written, the feels and poetic sentences are there just with chapter 1 and 2-- --Chap3: No way.. NO WAY! The alpha got a child with someone else, a lover, a LIFE?! It's fucking logic but it never happens!!! I am so shocked, a little sad 'cause bittersweet and very excited! Drama and complicated plot or is it just a trick the author made to make it looks like it?! If it's a trick, for onece it's well done. ... Maybe it's not his child since their babies have the same age and he was single and freshly graduated-- --Chap5: Fuck, he's not! XD-- --Chap8: NO! I'm looking at my ceilling, so desappointed. Marriage proposal on chapter 8?! Fuck youuuuuuu XD--