lenaGRonyx's manga / #slutty uke(8)

["Otona Keikenchi" - side story chap 5-6 in "Elektel Delusion" - Koibito Kijunchi extra "U Know..."]

["Kurui Naku No Wa Boku No Ban" - "Kurui Naku no wa Boku no Ban Beta"] |Chapter 8.5| K, I didn't understand all of it (translation or just complex, don't know) but, it's awesome, it looks really promising *o* Holy shit, this fast scanlation, chapters come out like nothing, this usually is so not the case that it gets almost weird XD Fuck it, it's going way too fast, they hated each other kind like all their live, you can't go over a trauma of your childhood time just like that, they need more time to begin to fall in love with each other and even way more time to realize it and moreover accept it (kinda "Ten Count" like). I even tought I missed a chapter somewhere. Damn, it's so fucking too bad, so too bad, too bad, too bad. It was sooooooooooooooo good man, like so easy to make it way better than this. Total disappointment. BUT there's a sequel, so I almost forgive, well not really, but I won't kick your ass xp

|Chapter 2| Je ne sais pas encore si je vais l'abandonner ou suivre.

|Chapter | C'est n'importe quoi, but I'm waiting next chapter =3

|Chapter 04|

["Serene Bird" - "Mania"] To be good, not there yet, still need more writting, experience, but not bad I think (comparé à d'autres mangas de l'auteur que j'ai essayé, sa manière de décrire le désir et la possessivité dans celui-ci sonne plus juste)

Maybe if it was longer and wellhanded, but without the baby with 4 DNA