lenaGRonyx's manga / #selfish seme(6)

[Seconde couple related to the oneshot in "Chiisana Koi no Melody"] Really good, really really, right in the kokoro damn, and it makes me sad because I don't have a man like this but it's the price for reading it XD

AAAAAAAh it was friggin' funny XDDDDD And hot, ah my god, I'm a shameless sadist pervert XD

It hurts so bad but it's so good and in the end you're happy x|

|Chapter 24 - Dropped| It looked so great, the first sex scene is overwhelming (suffocating just at drawing) but it's boring, the plot is simple and common but never wellhanded (ah... no, I just read one which was not so bad "Hydrangea Cage" but it's too short to be really noticed), it just end up with too much sex for nothing with lame dominant play and rubbish dirty talk (please, just do it right for fuck sake) and talking always leading to nothing. Plus there's a child in this story, it's like he's not there, he's an accessory in their relationship, nothing much (seriously why don't you use him in your story?)

Ca m'a mise bien. Il y a rien qui va au début, c'est pas très claire ni logique, les perso prennent des décisions qu'on comprend pas, quand ils commencent à avoir des sentiments l'un pour l'autre ça sonne faux (et les scènes de sexe sont pas assez hot ou sexy ou bien faites pour compenser, juste middle/middle low). Ensuite lorsque ça devient très psychologique et mature dû à l'événement de la fausse-couche et le contexte dans lequel elle a eu lieu, là ça devient génial. Les chapitres side story, je comprends pas comment ce sont des side stories d'ailleurs, mais dieu merci ils étaient là. C'était trop bien.