lenaGRonyx's manga / #poorly written(16)

Poorly written, so it's bad. Loved the miscarriage and all the psychological aspect of the plot (suicide, therapy for psychopath (xD)), it changes but rarely well handled (the worst was the family gathering after the miscariage, the author wanted it to not be too heavy and so use the gag "he cries easily" the whole fucking chapter, one not funny and two if you empathise at least a little with the couple who lost their baby, it was fucking horrible to read). And what the heck with this end, it's not finished.

|Chapter 3 - Dropped|

|Chapter 1 - Dropped|

|Chapter 77 - Dropped| It was fucking lame and awfully written (I have a lot of time). Plus Iri excited me at first, in like the 2 first chapters but after that his vibe disappointed me and the storyline didn't take the turn I hoped for. Kiyo is too stupid young, and everyone is lame. Cringed me as fuck

|Chapter 14| It was sexy but cheezy cringe, still Leo sometimes is really... woah

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