lenaGRonyx's manga / #playboy(10)

["Flowers"]

Okay, so: First story disgusted me, too "pink lame" (I think it's an expression like "cheezy" in english), was thinking that I won't read the next chapter. Second story, I couldn't help it the seme so hawt, I kept reading after all :p Third story, ahah good uke is scaring the seme, wanted another chapter :s Fourth story, didn't read it, not for me. Letdown with the extra, was mostly about the first couple...

Pas du tout aimé le premier couple, ni leur histoire ni leur personnalité ni leur look, donc gros bide. Deuxième couple, toujours aussi twisted mais celle-là, j'ai aimé.

[Shinshi to Norainu - Shisen no Sono Saki] I can't love it, I'm sorry, I can't! It's like a big joke. I'm so so so disappointed, because... First story: I really enjoyed chapter 1 (like that: "Awww~ more-more-more! I really like iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit. I want to cry (TT~TT)... "), when I saw all the updates, I thought "7 chapters?! About Banri x Masaomi?! PLZ MAKE IT TRUE. No I'm sure there will be some side story, keep dreaming on girl, keep dreaming on." But in the end it is so rushed damn it!! More I read chapters and less good it was, it sucked! The story was great, it could have been such a good storyyyyyyyyy! Banri was hot and Masaomi was sexy (I adore his name, it sounds so cute ^^) Second story: My first thoughts were "and again a perverted or sneaky secretary with glasses, pfffffffff... so boring", but when I saw the whole character, *great insparation*... I explain myself: - the secretary: "Well, yeah uh no, he looks puny, stunted." - the secretary at night: "Uhmm, looks kinda tasty, if I could take you home I wouldn't say no ;}" - the secretary without glasses: "OH MY FUCKING-- WHO ARE YOU?!?!" My conclusion: Eda is the child of Medusa and an incubus, he just has to look at you one second in the eyes, and you take off all your clothes. The glasses are there to restrict his power or the world would be a chaos of lust. Yes, yes, it's the holly truth, you know. So when I understood the mangaka's goal with this story (top playboy forced bottoming or seke, YES SEKE, BOTH! Oh my dream), I was already supporting Eda..., But with that "STATE LEVEL 3: INCUBUS MODE ACTIVATE", I ended up like, uhm, how to say it... => "YES DO IT MAN! FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT! I AM WITH YOU LIKE MAD" ... ... ... To end up fucking up the story. I was seriously mad but of rage: 1. Aki disappears, just like that, you don't know where he's gone (seriously?). 2. Eda makes a lame confession, his wild sexy side died out (bleh.) 3. THE WORST: Yamaoki, the president, who's a pure top (it's exactly what he said), moans, cries, drools, with his face of "ah, no, take me, I don't know what's happening"... GRHFHAHHAHAHHF IT. S-U-C-K-S. He's a total other person, it's stupid!! He's A CEO! He's Eda's boos! He's older! He's smart! He's a playboy! He fucked several of his secretaries! He's a pure top! Did you see his face when he was flirting with Aki, so full of self-confidence? SO THERE'S NO WAY HE DOESN'T HAVE GUTS, NO WAY HE'S NOT FUCKING ARROGANT AND COCKY, AND NO WAY HE DOESN'T HAVE PRIDE!!!!!! He just can't react like that, even if he has been pent up, he's not a novice with sex, he's a PLAYBOY, a manizer, an ass-chaser and not so young; it's not just because he's gonna bottoming for the first time that he'll totally lose himself, be serious! First, I hate it when the autor CHANGES the personnality of his character to realize his fantasies, how can we take you seriously after that? Second, I hate this fucking cliché in yaoi where top=man and bottom=woman, all these poor guy who act all girly just because they take it in the ass it's stupid! It's not because he's gonna bottoming that he's not a fucking man anymore! I am a woman when I fuck with men, I don't become a man when I fuck with a girl, and when you put a finger in your boyfriend's ass-- well maybe, he'll react a little differently than usually, but he doesn't suddenly change for that, begin to moan or cry like a pussy in his matting season! Here Yamaoki looks like a little girl all of a sudden. (Rhaaaaah!) 4. The last but not the least,... ALL THIS FUSS FOR NOTHING, WHAT THE HELL!?! I'm sorry, but now, it squarely looks the mangaka himself thought "I give up, I do not imagine them, I can't bring myself too choose how they'll do it after that". (SO. PISSED.) Third story: I have been pretty nasty already here so I'll just say for the appreciation "no comment" , maybe it's not so bad but in fact, glasses are often a total turn-off for me. The characters with glasses are almost always: smart bastards and/or big perverts and/or weak innocent ukes. And the worst for me is the last categorie, the innocent uke with glasses, so lame, so weak, so gross, ewww! For example, I read "Hidoku Shinaide", and I just love Maya (and the other couple looks interesting too, about his cousin and a god of sex if I'm not wrong ^p^) he's so perfect, sweet, so in love, caring, possessive, manly, sexy, perfect body, almost a celebrity, rich, and so fucking hot in bed, and even his new hair-cup I'm happy with it! But when I read, especially while sex scenes, I hide Nemu-somthing's face because he just turns me completely off. MAYA PLZ LET HIM RELOOKING HIMSELF DAMN IT, DON'T BE SO SHITTING!!!!! And it's stupid but I support glasses better when they're rectangular or something but especially not the kind of round ones. So this uke here, Sousuke? I just can't.

At first I didn't like it, the atmosphere of the first story was too harsh for me, but little by little, it became a quite great lecture (well I still don't like the first couple)

["See You at the Crosswalk" - "Stop at the Red Light"] |Chapter 11|