lenaGRonyx's manga / #omegaverse(82)

I didn't understand how they ended up falling in love and toghether, one moment they were not and the seconde after they were. And the fuck buddies contract, the author forgot? Also I wanted the cousin and secretary's love story, too bad.

Not very good but it was a little different (no at all for the twist in omegaverse rules, coudn't care less) and more realistic in their conflicts and it made me keep reading. For personal taste, I have a problem with Hyeon-Oh's submissive character (too much for me to take a liking to him, I'm a proud person and I coudn't allow myself to behave like him, so I can't help thinking "Hugh, have some dignity please"), and I dislike the dynamic of their relationship cause the balance of power is too off.

I don't know if it's bad writting or if there are chapters or frames missing, but there's a problem, it's hard to follow or immerse in. And the fact the plot turn around the fact of having a child, while there's no omega in their males couple, took a lot of my brain time, thinking "huh? how? why? I missed something? traduction? author misunderstanding? huh?"

First, problems with the writting, so it's not good. Second, korean thing, so the lover is the one with the most social prestige, often an asshole at that and I can't coop with it. If the love interest was Muchan, this story would have been way less boring (if he didn't blackmail or rape Juheon obviously). Third, the end is abrupt.

|Chapter 45| I like it, it's a pretty built story, Isaac is dangerous and tough (for "once" the uke is cool/the cooler). But too bad cause the plot is "realistic", mature, deep and then, Felix come, with a childish attitude and ruin every serious business. The first impression is good, he is sexy, serious, looks dangerous and to know his business,.. he's a fucking leader, boss in arms trafficking, worlwide knowed, and still, you don't know how, doesn't act like it. Besides that, fell in love with Isaac out of nowhere (he spoke with him 2 times 3 sec and Bam), too fast, and started acting like a 10 years old in love, ugh.. and he speaks too much. While sensitive moments (critical emotional) he runs a monologue of love and possessiness ruining the climax yet I'm sure 4 words or conveys max 2 ideas within 2 sentences would have a greater impact. I am sad, I would have liked it more if the "heavy" and triller mood was held the whole story and so adjust Felix's character.

|Chapter 34 - Dropped| First "What does he mean it's his first time?? He's been cheated on multiple times and just got out of a 3 year relationship" and like always, didn't ship with the successful rich alpha. Poorly written and bad translate, so it's too annoying to keep up (and since the "level of writting", it doesn't make sense Hesoo didn't fall in love with Taeoh, he is his type by his looks, he is kind, attentionate, in good terms with his family, cares about his son, his son loves him, his son's teacher and neighbour so they see each other all the time, and an alpha so they should be alchemy). I was waiting to see Taeoh's past (I suppose he is son of a mafia boss), but I gave up.

|Chapter 88| I like eyes changing colors It's too long no? Like half of the chapters looks like extra, makes it look bad.

Ahh seke stories are super rare, I want more and a little better handed one. I don't know if there is problem with the scans or if it's just not well written, but it looked like there were pages or frames missing and not only once, so it takes you out of it.

Poorly written, so it's bad. Loved the miscarriage and all the psychological aspect of the plot (suicide, therapy for psychopath (xD)), it changes but rarely well handled (the worst was the family gathering after the miscariage, the author wanted it to not be too heavy and so use the gag "he cries easily" the whole fucking chapter, one not funny and two if you empathise at least a little with the couple who lost their baby, it was fucking horrible to read). And what the heck with this end, it's not finished.