Keeper of the Pearl
I didn't understand how they ended up falling in love and toghether, one moment they were not and the seconde after they were. And the fuck buddies contract, the author forgot? Also I wanted the cousin and secretary's love story, too bad.
Okusama wa Alpha
I don't know if it's bad writting or if there are chapters or frames missing, but there's a problem, it's hard to follow or immerse in. And the fact the plot turn around the fact of having a child, while there's no omega in their males couple, took a lot of my brain time, thinking "huh? how? why? I missed something? traduction? author misunderstanding? huh?"
Pearl Boy
|Chapter 37| Dooshik's hair color and length change like every 3 chapter (get on my nerves and also make me laugh) and he speaks too much while sexy time, but he fucks like me, made me laugh (got curious about the author) XD --Chapter 33, the heck? First, the guy Dooshik forgot about urgence/hospital, his lover could be dying and he still took the time to fight with Pilwon. Then they wanna make out (why? going to hospital is still an issue), their injuries flew off (fuck you), and why? why Jooha is up to it and how Dooshik didn't saw bruises and stains of blood? Jooha just got raped and bled because of it, so how? why any of them would want it?-- --Chapter 36 was hilarious--
Smyrna & Capri
Hard to follow the supernatural logic, which doesn't seem really well build and also no contant, just not necessary complicated to make it looks like something amazing. And I would have prefered if while the second pregnancy, Theo took Calion as his second capri in orther to protect Seram and theirs positions, their child and pregnancy (to make believe Calion fathered the second pregnancy and to sent away Seram and their child, to rebuild Langeres). Their reunion would have been more rewarding and heart-warming.
The Origin of Species
|Chapter 65|
Ai o Ataeru Kemonotachi
Wolves behind bars
|Chapter 77 - Dropped| It was fucking lame and awfully written (I have a lot of time). Plus Iri excited me at first, in like the 2 first chapters but after that his vibe disappointed me and the storyline didn't take the turn I hoped for. Kiyo is too stupid young, and everyone is lame. Cringed me as fuck
Blood Link