lenaGRonyx's manga / #gay pregnancy(51)

["Naruto" - Sasuke x Naruto] Pfft-. >x<

J'aime. #FB I fucking love Kudou, I want a sensible husband like him <3

|Chapter 100|

|Chapter 159 - Dropped| Too light while processing heavy plot/event, seems like the author can't make a decision and changes his mind all the time, poorly written, too much translation errors, not enough research/experience with a lot of subjects, and I waited a bit of explanation for the hermaphrodite but seems like it wasn't planned (and censored for some reason)

I didn't understand how they ended up falling in love and toghether, one moment they were not and the seconde after they were. And the fuck buddies contract, the author forgot? Also I wanted the cousin and secretary's love story, too bad.

Not very good but it was a little different (no at all for the twist in omegaverse rules, coudn't care less) and more realistic in their conflicts and it made me keep reading. For personal taste, I have a problem with Hyeon-Oh's submissive character (too much for me to take a liking to him, I'm a proud person and I coudn't allow myself to behave like him, so I can't help thinking "Hugh, have some dignity please"), and I dislike the dynamic of their relationship cause the balance of power is too off.

I don't know if it's bad writting or if there are chapters or frames missing, but there's a problem, it's hard to follow or immerse in. And the fact the plot turn around the fact of having a child, while there's no omega in their males couple, took a lot of my brain time, thinking "huh? how? why? I missed something? traduction? author misunderstanding? huh?"

First, problems with the writting, so it's not good. Second, korean thing, so the lover is the one with the most social prestige, often an asshole at that and I can't coop with it. If the love interest was Muchan, this story would have been way less boring (if he didn't blackmail or rape Juheon obviously). Third, the end is abrupt.