lenaGRonyx's manga / #delinquent/criminal/yakuza(58)

I am crying

["Hitorijime Boyfriend" - "Hitorijime My Hero"] |Chapte 17| I like it, better than the other manga, and they are sooooo cute <3

*fuck this shit im out* Wwaaaaaah, there's no happy end!!

|Chapter 03|

|Vol 3 Chap 6.5| It's cute, really, also the drawing, the art is really cute (moreover it's weird XD) But I'm starting to get bored

["Serene Bird" - "Mania"] To be good, not there yet, still need more writting, experience, but not bad I think (comparé à d'autres mangas de l'auteur que j'ai essayé, sa manière de décrire le désir et la possessivité dans celui-ci sonne plus juste)

["Serene Bird" - "Mania"] |Chapter 56 - Dropped| C'est super mal écrit, j'en peux plus. The plot isn't really the problem, it's plainly poorly written and doesn't make any sense (events, characters, dialogue). Sometimes, it's rushed and other it's just "fuck the logic". Moreover written by someone who probably doesn't understand these addressed traumas, so makes it worse

Smut style is not really for me, it will always sting my eyes, however... Pil-gyun.. I was scared of his girly features, childish attitude and the incest roleplay (never really passed through the "Dad" thing, I replace it by old man in my head), but I am still a simple person: he is a hella hot sex partner. --Oooh my god, chapter 12 and 13 are sooo fucking funny-- --Sex in chapter 18 was, I really think, the sexiest scene I ever read--

|Chapter 159 - Dropped| Too light while processing heavy plot/event, seems like the author can't make a decision and changes his mind all the time, poorly written, too much translation errors, not enough research/experience with a lot of subjects, and I waited a bit of explanation for the hermaphrodite but seems like it wasn't planned (and censored for some reason)

|Chapter | I like it, it's a pretty built story, Isaac is dangerous and tough (for "once" the uke is cool/the cooler). But too bad cause the plot is "realistic", mature, deep and then, Felix come, with a childish attitude and ruin every serious business. The first impression is good, he is sexy, serious, looks dangerous and to know his business,.. he's a fucking leader, boss in arms trafficking, worlwide knowed, and still, you don't know how, doesn't act like it. Besides that, fell in love with Isaac out of nowhere (he spoke with him 2 times 3 sec and Bam), too fast, and started acting like a 10 years old in love, ugh.. and he speaks too much. While sensitive moments (critical emotional) he runs a monologue of love and possessiness ruining the climax yet I'm sure 4 words or conveys max 2 ideas within 2 sentences would have a greater impact. I am sad, I would have liked it more if the "heavy" and triller mood was held the whole story and so adjust Felix's character.