konpeiko's manga / #Beautiful Art(446)

i love the art!!! but this is a series of short stories (about 2 chapters each). the smut is good but because it’s just a collection of short stories, it seems each story is kinda rushed and ends abruptly ): feels like they would all make good full length stories because they start with interesting plots but they had to be dumbed down to become a short story :/

love the art! good smut (: the plot has some dark psycho moments and it was a good story but there was basically little to no progression of the relationship between the two main leads? like they just suddenly fell in love and it made no sense lol it’s like the writer didn’t know how to write it such that the flow of the story would be natural. but after that, the story was good and i like that it’s just 9 chapters for a smut, not too short and not too long.

love the art! not a fan of the 10 year age gap between the ML and FL but the story is written well such that they do address the concerns of the age gap instead of behaving like it's normal. ML is a bratty highschooler but has good character growth as the story progresses.

love the art! great smut :3