well shit's manga / #Two braincells aligning(199)

The premise was rlly promising but the pacing and exposition/narration is so so incredibly confusing. The story boarding feels off too and jumps between scenes and locations rlly weirdly. Sometimes i dont even know what a dialogue/chapter is about bc of how choppy it is lmao. Still dont see the romantic chemistry between mc and ml, their interaction feels so confusing at times. The time skips makes it worse too. At most, it feels like youre reading an early draft of a story where they didnt get to expand the bullet points of certain sections and went straight to the drawing board, just sticky notes of everything and anything and youre just left wondering where in the story are we at lol. No climax, rising action nothing its all so confusinfhdhbd

KURIKI SHINOBU MY MFKIN GOATTTTTTTTTTTTTTT THIS BANGGGSSS i love it i love it i love the couple’s dynamic especially how kind and considerate the ml is so far in explaining everything and setting boundaries with the mc WOOP WOOP i know a banger when i see one

I love this way more than i thought LMAO oh mitsuo i love u my beautiful loser boyfailure of a ml….. i love how this story is just him going PLLEASE PLEASE PLEASE GIVE ME A CHANCE nonstop hes so real all mls should be this pathetic and unhinged <3 and yusuke is such a dear to be so easily swooned to anything mitsuo wants LMAO ah love it.. also feel very much robbed at the potential of crossdressing sex…. Sniffles….. we could have had it all…

OHHHHHH immediately a certified banger gusao-nim i trust u with my life

Cant even blame mc for being a chuuni during his first isekai he was like what ? 13 or somethinf LMAO i too would have pulled the same obnoxious teen bullshit lmao. Anyway its an Interesting fun premise of isekai-ing two times, now older and more mature. Pacing is very fast and im not rlly expecting anything from this but oh well will just enjoy the ride for this one

Its okay, tl is super confusing tho so i couldnt understand what the conflict the main couple was going through most of the time (and even if i do i feel like its so overused/low stakes especially for 10 chaps like their kink isnt even anything crazy its just praise/pampering lol, i would have been more on board if the conflict is like, say, either one of them has a sado/maso streak that requires a middleground for both parties lol) but oh well its okay im just vibing with whatevers happening lol, it was a bit boring since its quite hard to find a story with a wellwritten subverse plot (such a shame bc the premise and dynamic of these two couldve been so fun if their kinks were a bit more intense bc cmon its gangster x doctor!!!!! AHHH) but ml is an incredibly sweet dom so thats cute! Love the second couple more though……. Sigh need more sub tops as the main ml <3

summary did an insane disservice to the story like sure mc was unhinged in the first chapter but that whole gag was dropped quite quickly and was more focused on the development of mc and ml’s chemistry and attraction for each other which i thought was really nice! Their dynamic is so fun and enjoyable bc theyre truly in a way dumb4dumb their moe gap is how theyre both smart and intellectual as hell but also just complete air in that noggin when theyre with eachother i love them so much LMAO, ml is such a menace but his little backstory on how he fell for the mc first was rlly cute, i rlly love this author’s way of making the ml fall first bc the revelation has always been such a sweet surprise :’) rly rly enjoyed their interactions/bantering too it flows so well given their personalities. Again, ml is both innocent and mischievous at the same time, i love how he relies on mc a lot. Him dropping the whole star student front and acting more his age around mc is rlly cute lmao especially that “uwu i dont think i can handle being abroad alone…. I need someone to help from the dept… LIKE SAEKI SENSEI!!!!” LMAO what a silly cunning guy i love him. he just has a rlly fun balance of both a loser loverboy and a cunning mischievous menace, a combo i ddint know i would rlly love LMAO And him not realising saeki’s feelings bc he thought he didnt have a chance is so cute like omg his moe gap is adorable ahh. But also i completely get him i too wouldnt be able to believe i had any game to win over a milf of a twink I love how theres no unnecessary drama too just these two building up their chemistry while also falling in love along the way. Sweet short fulfilling and simple! Again, i would rlly have loved to see more volumes of these two just living it up abroad their dynamic is such a delight to read just so so adorable and silly. author… u write the chemistry and romance between ur charas so well god what a fun read!! Never a miss with this author seriously

Hyunjoon and jinha are one of the most gorgeous couples in bl ever my goodness especially hyunjoon my GAWD fine ass…. And jinha is such a babe i completely understand hyunjoon’s smitten progression this was a really fun light hearted read!