well shit's manga / #Historical(3)

AHHH THE DRAMAAAAAAAAA I LOVE IT I LOVE IT ITS TEW GOOOOODDDDD

This was so insanely fast paced i get whiplash every time ml’s character change in every chapterhdjd like his character isnt consistent at all? You’d expect him to be the lone aloof wolf cold archetype but then hes a tsun? And then hes loud and shameless the next ? Its like ? Author threw a dart on a spinning wheel and decided whichever archetype it lands on that’ll be the ml’s personality for the chapter lmao. And mc’s character is just very mary sue despite the work position hes in which you’d expect him to be at least more ? Firm in his standing lol idk its okay though, clearly the story’s direction isnt that serious, so its not a big deal. Plot is non existent too with very two dimensional, shallow characters lol. Pacing is fast as fucking hell with everything comically resolving in one panel LMAO. Feels very wattpady and amateur in the writing, which is a shame bc this premise couldve been really fun and sensual filled with tons of sexual tension bc cmon ? A captain and his subordinate fucking??? The stakes at play since theyre both knights… the dangers…The amount of kinky rough sex + yearning we could have had….. all the possibilities if it was well written and expanded, sniffles… oh well its rlly just a cute emptyheaded read to pass the time. Very much a nothing burger that i feel quite bored and lost in eating. Didnt really enjoy it lol, Its eh.