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Struggle

Complete | 김닌자 | 2000 released
2023-01-09 13:07 marked

no stars because its straight up ASS just some dookie ass cow shit story and characters. pacing was ass, character depth was non existent, plot and development was ASS. Ml aggravated me the fucking most like how the fuck did u get into medical school when your critical thinking skills is non existent??? Dont get me wrong, i love the misunderstanding trope but this was done so so poorly and lazily ITS JUST ASS YO???? did no one proof read the draft of this story????? Its so so poorly written, its so insanely immature lol dont get me started with the “2nd ml” side plot my god the way i rolled my eyes there has to be a red RED line manual book of shit mls/mcs must NOT do no matter the plot bc it will be a major turn off for the audience and the ml here was able to hit every single one of those icks and atp, just dont make the main couple end game bc it just feels so shallow and lazy LMAO especially when its not even a dead dove kind of plot?? the misunderstanding could have been written so much better but no it was just lazy ass writing??? Like im baffled at how lazy the whole thing was presented?? Ml kept on getting plot armour it was infuriating. Mc should have kicked him in the balls, signed the inheritance pseudo marriage agreement, file a divorce and dipped WITH the inheritance money bc 7 years…over some idiotic misunderstanding from ML’s dookie ass assumption… mama u deserve better lmao sigh hate that i read this till the end with hopes that the author would improve and maybe leave it in a more ambiguous ending where ml continues to try and win mc over but no ofc not lol god i cant stop laughing please dont be like me dont waste your time reading this

Yamashii Koi no Hajimekata

Ongoing | KOTO Sato | 2018 released
2022-01-18 08:00 marked

I love somno i rlly do but the Plot was so lacking it was depressing.. The sex scenes and angles are amazing though!! It would hve done it justice if mc wasnt such a pushover dhjdjd like the ml was so unlikable i didnt get attached with any characters at all they had no chara depth? If only the author focused more on the ml’s fear of “tainting” mc and finding masturbation “dirty” and expanded more on it than jsut putting it in an extra.... it’d be great??? Like if that was the main ongoing theme for the manga and throughout the story he slowly comes into self acceptance with his feelings this would hve been a great story but alas... missed opportunity lol and dont get me started with mc...like can we PLEASE have a mc who doesnt apologize first over an issue that wasnt even his fault in the first place like if ml is gonna be childish and play the cold shoulder card then two can play that game??? I just dont like how its mc’s problem like ml shouldve been the one that started clearing shit up if he likes mc ? Idk maybe i woke up the wrong side of the bed today bc im feeling pissed at how bland these characters are djdnnd