otakulys's manga / #first time(4)

Now I feel even worse for Sakai! I wish we could see his happy ending. Damn you, Miyamoto Kano! Your stories are always so heartbreaking! But I guess it could be worse. And I always end up coming back for more.

"You're not an old man???" That... is that supposed to be a compliment? Does this guy look super wrinkly and decrepit and I'm just not seeing it? Anyway, this isn't bad. It could have been more powerful, but I did like the little parallel at the end. Not a fan of the older uke/younger seme thing, and an underage seme at that, but otherwise, it was all right.

Hmm... Only one chapter, so I'm not sure yet. The art is honestly hit or miss for me. It can be beautiful, but sometimes it looks awkward. I hope these characters end up fleshed out and awesome, though. I like Minato so far, but I feel less than nothing for the other dude. The straight guy. I hope he becomes more interesting soon. I also get the "sad past" feeling from Minato, so I hope we get to see something like that soon.

Aw, very cute. They obviously really care about each other. <3 I like established couples, too. I hope the rest of the manga is just about them, being together and happy.