It was honestly just fine, the storyline started off very nicely, I had nothing to really critisize, however as it progressed, it became kind of obvious that the ending was rushed. So many things could have been expanded on, like Joohoon's (light hair, yellow eyes, creep) emotions and why he is the way he is (that doesn't necessarily need an explanation, but it would have been nice to see why exactly things progressed the way they did. In the ending note the creator themselves stated that they wished they had put more focus on the correlation between the picture in his wallet and why he liked Jihoon or whatever his name was, Siwon's twin brother)
At some point in the story the red-headed bully just disappears? Idk, he went off somewhere I guess.
The characters could have been expanded on and the others' stories would have been interesting but oh, well, it is just the direction the creator decided to take
Overall pretty good, fun, the ending was really sweet, it eased Taemin's (Siwon) anxiety
At the End of the Road