Definitely could've been a lot better. I read on the author's note that it was supposed to be gl which I think would also better suit this honestly. There were a few things that could've been clarified at the end like what happened with the brother, what the red guy's father's role in the ending of the story, and etc. But it's still good, and was able to provide a good backstory from the main plot. And of course, the fucking art.
Cover Up