ivy's manga / #promiscuous(46)

the story idea is nice but in my opinion ways to short. I guess it could be a really emotionally manga.

1ch, bad cliffhanger

ch2 cliffhanger

stepbrother x stepbrother it starts just like a smutty broxbro- but it changed into a darker story. but somehow... for my taste something is missing or is too much (not only childabuse, almost rape in school and later he met the culprit again... more focus may on the childabuse the reason for his fear/phobia would have been better) adapted to bl cd: only download (or to buy) http://www.yaoiotaku.com/forums/threads/46260-3-pun-Instant-no-Chinmoku

unexpected good. it could be 5 stars if it would be longer. we only see scratches... of the charas, of the story.... https://www.177mh.net/201104/191815.html?page=29 long haired seme