Lil Maniac's manga / #Beautiful Art(258)

Damn even though this was short it was well written~ It’d be awesome if this had a sequel

Omygosh omygosh omygoshhhhhhh! I’m only on the second chapter and I gotta say, damn man this sensei’s works are really intriguing. The characters are drawn so realistically, the proportions are well done (unlike those manga where everyone is so unnecessarily pretty that it messes wit ur aesthetic sense. I mean, not like there’s anything wrong with that, since it’s pleasing to the eyes. But still my guy.). The story is just so.... damn. “On doorstep” is the first of this person’s work I’ve read, and it’s the one that brought me here. I’ve gotta say bruh, this sensei really has a talent for writing ‘on the edge of your seat’ manga. Amazing. That was amazing. Wish there was more... damn.

Ummmm...... so..... the development.. where is it?? I mean, yh it was short but... I’ve read shorter stories that have a lot more going on and still have wayyy more character development and satisfying plot. But.... this was.. well... a very “yaoi” story if ya know what I mean (no plot just sex and scenes leading up to sex). ┐(´д‘)┌ it wasn’t bad tho I guess. Wasn’t the worst I’ve read, and it had a little substance to it. The art was also beautiful (it’s what caught my eye in the first place).

NYOOOOOO YOU CANT JUST END IT LIKE THATTTTTT!!! Damn this was some very “shounen ai” shounen ai (intended double). I mean, I did like the action, it kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time and at one point all I felt was doki doki.. twas bad for ma kokoro my guy. Anyways. I kinda wish I saw more of love and peach’s relationship, and the other side characters as well. This manhwa focused more on the action, and tho it was bl, there was more ‘b’ than ‘l’ lolol. I didn’t hate it tho. It didn’t take away from the story. It would just be a really nice addition to have more scenes on the romantic side, to develop their relationship further. The ending was also kind of rushed... that last character introduction was kind of abrupt. It wasn’t all bad tho. I still really like this piece.

3.5 stars. Weird but ok lol

Amagash another great omegaverse~ I especially love this because the seme not even once forced himself on the uke, even despite the urges. He protected the uke with all his might and showered both him and the daughter with love. You don’t find many omegaverse like this with a non-forceful non-rapey seme who doesn’t give in to the pheromones and rapes the uke, but cherishes them instead

Bitch. This is my shit right here. Everything i love in a manhwa. I. Freckin. LOVE IT BITCHHHHHHHH GIMMMEEE MOOOOORE!!!!

I can only say I like the art. The story was ok.

Damn this is the type of seme I want to see in every story! One that’s patient and loving and doesn’t selfishly force his feelings onto the other person. What a great guy~ Total husband material (‘∀’●)♡ This was a nice story. It’d be nice if it continued.