maychan's manga / #Cliché(10)

another porn that try to use plot to show porn for guys. annoying -^-

THAT'S NOT HOW IT WORKS!!

amazing main character development! crap peace and too many things throwing into the mix with no real point! the Shoujo build was crap, stupid and cliche. most of the character's feelings were not reliable. but have a good art. overall a waste of a good idea!

Dropp of course ╮(￣▽￣)╭

the first story was okay, not much of a plot but at least it was nice. unlike the second couple that I really didn't care or like at all. their story is kind of dumb. the third one was like "a dumb guy go to a concert, he meets another guy that invite him to his tent and rapes him (if he was drunk and didn't know what he was doing) and I guess they will keep having sex for no reason after meeting once. so the third in story-wise was the worse out of all of them.

so much bad cliche, bad writing and just ahhh FL and ML both idiots. ML is annoying and controlling and FL is fucking dumb and not act like someone from the future. their "fall in love at first sight" bs is too overuse that it just boring.

this comic sooo rushed! like wtf their relationship jump from 0 to 120 it so dumb and so cliche. it does not feel like the Seme care at all about the uke. saying I love with no meaning behind it is pointless!

drop ch 76. this plot is so dragging, boring and full of cliche and bad trops. and MC is super dumb most of the time and prince is the same old trops of the guy prince saving the girl cliches. and of course, how can you do a plot without stupid and bs drama with the same old bitch mother, bitch sister and an asshole father I want to murder. yay =_= the only thing that is good is the art.

drop ch 16. the story is very cliche, boring, and trying to be cute but only looks ridiculous. the FL is of course dumb as a rock and sometimes annoying. and the side character girl is gay supporting cast fanservice - annoying fanservice and dumb too, she adds nothing to the plot other than to be annoying and an insult to the readers.

ch 64 I'm not sure how to feel about this. I hate how they use mantel illnesses without any need or purpose, just to show how poor FL is! mental illnesses are no joke! if you going to use it at least show the outcome it does to the body. but no why would they show it?! I'm really sick of this bs!!!