Parsley's manga / #Short story(3)

It was really great at first, I love how there's a bit of comedy there and how fluffy and cute they are when they are trapped inside but the resolution part kinda lacks impact for me. The way Mr. Park say he likes him and before that fast forward is kinda off. It could've been better but compared to other short story webtoons I've read, this is already great so far. The plot is interesting although it kinda lacks character development but overall, I really enjoyed reading it and the ending is cute and good. That's why i still rate it 4★ since it makes me blush and internally screaming on the first part. Wish it could've been longer so that we can see their growth and I think the author is adorable haha

I live for the smut!! It's so hot!! But the plot is too short, I wish it could have been longer so we can see character development from each other and I love the idea of them being seke!! I really want to see a switch couple!! If there's at least 1 chapter where they switch roles, I would rate it more than 5★!! Overall, it's good but there's something I want more, maybe the art?

This is not that bad actually. It's just that everything happens so fast, as expected of yaoi short stories. But in terms of plot, I've read a lot way more better yaoi short stories than this one. The smut is just okay, I like how it is uncensored and the art is good also. But the plot, could've been done better.