The Ritual
Yooo! That was a really fucked up tradition!! Really horrible like omyghad!! He was just a minor y'all!! And to think that the master and the people just let it happened, you are all sick!! Anyways, the plot is not really my thing and I think it's just okay, not really memorable. The characters were also okay but I appreciate the seme's effort to help the uke cuz he deserves better!! Screw all those people on the village! Also, I'm really curious what would happened to their village now since the uke is no longer duty, will it collapsed? or is just a myth? cuz the story didn't really explained that. I would've rate it higher if it would end like the movie weathering with you where the MC chooses the girl over the world and then continuous rains happens. But in this story, it wasn't really shown so I assumed that this was just a myth. Which means they just raped an innocent child for their delusions!! Overall, it's okay. It's only for one-time read. Their horrible tradition ruined it all! It would be better that those people suffer lol because the MC chooses the uke which means no more sacrifices and thus, the village suffers which they deserve! That would be a lot better IMO.
Shinai Naru Omega e
IT NEEDS MORE CHAPTERS TO PROPERLY TELL THAT THIS STORY IS BEAUTIFUL!! Like really!! We need more chapters cuz that was too short!! I'm not satisfied yet! like how could you end the story in the most exciting part where they already have a child!!? I also have lots pf questions like what happened after the confrontation with the brothers? Did the older brother stop harassing them after that? Also, why the omega girl and the brother met in the end? are they friends or what? Also, how did the seme know that he feels the same way as the uke? when did it start? like there are still lots of questions that were not answered! This story lacks details because the chapters were way too short!! We need another volume please author-nim!!! Overall, I really like this one knowing that I only saw this by accident. When I first read this, I was really hook and thought that this is really interesting!! An omega hiding his true identity and an alpha who hates omegas in a master x servant relationship!! It started really good but in the middle around chapter 3, it's really confusing because everything happens so fast! And also, the development of the semes feelings towards the uke was portrayed really poorly. Like there should have more scenes between them having good time together to convince us readers that there's something sparking inside between them! That's why we need more chapters!!! Cuz that ending with them having a child is like a miracle!! That was a good ending but why so short??? Please have a side story or a sequel cuz I'm really invested in this. I WANT MORE OF THEM AS A FAMILY!!
Oh, My Young Master!