Delivery Boy Debacle
This ended way too sudden!!! Ugghhh!! This has so much potential!! The idea of the plot is there but it was really poorly delivered like so much plot holes but I understand since it's the author's first story but it's not bad!! It's good actually and very funny!! The last chapter with the bunnies had me laughing so hard!! The seme is also very funny because of how he keeps misinterpreting everything and he's so slow lol and the uke is a tsundere lol!! Overall, I really enjoyed reading it cuz it's funny, the characters were likeable, the art is good and the plot is okay but can be done better. I wish it was more laid out, like how they deal the problem with the antagonist, the side characters, and the development then, the story would be a lot better! Although the ending is really funny, I still wish there were more chapters cuz that's way too short!! I want more!!
Karini mo Renai
Its an "okay" story for me. Not bad but there's nothing much interesting piece that intrigues me to re-read it. Although, there were some parts where I can relate like the uke in the 3rd couple where I think we have the same way of thinking in handling feelings but still overall, I think it's only good for one-time read. The arts is somewhat inconsistent? I like it and at the same time kinda lacking like the smut scenes are cut and not full... The plot is not really my cup of tea although I like the 2nd couple cuz I think they are adorable especially the seme (I kinda dont like the ukes actions/reasoning when they breakup tho). I also like the uke in the 3rd couple cuz we have the same mind lol and the first couple is just fine, nothing remarkable. I would have rate it 3★ but the bonus chapter 7 makes me smile especially the 2nd couple. If it were to end in their respective chapters, it's obviously 3★ since it feels hanging like the 2nd couple and the 1st couple ending is kinda lacking like I want more impact or something....
Rise of Moonsoo