momichupa oppabu osu time
This story is actually really good!!! It's different from what I expected because the cover image looks so revealing and "smutty" that I thought this one will just gonna be all porn but there's actually more into it!! I find the plot really good and interesting! And the fact that theres actually some moral lessons you can learned from here is beyond amazing! And I love the comedy too!! The art and the smut were both great too! And I just loveee all the characters here!! They were all so adorable and likeable!! And I can't wait for the next update!! It's been months now I hope someone can pick this up and update this pleaseee cuz I just love this one!!
Burlesque Night
I think the pacing on this one is a bit too fast..? Because I feel like some parts could have been more detailed like the development and the past but overall, I think the plot is great! I love some angst, the action scene, and a lil bit drama but the ukes past when he was gang raped still bothers me! I think it's really unnecessary and it's making me pissed cuz I really don't like rape! Nonetheless, I'm glad they didn't show it and I'm still confused about the vertical ass!! lmao. The characters on this one are also likeable although I wish there's more scene about the side couple.. Also, I love the art too and the smut is really hot and sexy!! And that lap dance and strip tease dance is sooo ugh!! So hot and erotic!! Overall, I think it's great and I did enjoy reading this one although it's really short.. but still a good read!
Koi wo Suru Tsumori wa Nakatta