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I absolutely love this!! Definitely one of the best short BL stories I've ever read! The plot is just so good and unique and it's not dragged out much and their love is just so pure and innocent I'm gonna cryyyyy This author is really good at making short stories!! One of the best, highly recommended!! That was just a satisfying read. I wish there were some side stories after what happened like how they together celebrate christmas and when they started dating because they deserved it!! I blame it all to that homophobic boy! There's nothing wrong with 2 boys holding each others hands, you malicious brat!! >-< Overall, it's really good. It's just the first chapter but I'm already hooked! Definitely unique and interesting especially on how they depict the love of a young boy. It was just so heartwarming and pure and that card is so adorable as well as the cat! They deserved better! I wish happiness for this couple cuz I love them so innocent!! I just hope at least there are some short panels where the author show their lovey dovey cuz they're really cute! 4 chapters are not enough!!! I want moreee!! pleaseee
The Ritual
Yooo! That was a really fucked up tradition!! Really horrible like omyghad!! He was just a minor y'all!! And to think that the master and the people just let it happened, you are all sick!! Anyways, the plot is not really my thing and I think it's just okay, not really memorable. The characters were also okay but I appreciate the seme's effort to help the uke cuz he deserves better!! Screw all those people on the village! Also, I'm really curious what would happened to their village now since the uke is no longer duty, will it collapsed? or is just a myth? cuz the story didn't really explained that. I would've rate it higher if it would end like the movie weathering with you where the MC chooses the girl over the world and then continuous rains happens. But in this story, it wasn't really shown so I assumed that this was just a myth. Which means they just raped an innocent child for their delusions!! Overall, it's okay. It's only for one-time read. Their horrible tradition ruined it all! It would be better that those people suffer lol because the MC chooses the uke which means no more sacrifices and thus, the village suffers which they deserve! That would be a lot better IMO.
Lima Syndrome
This story is MESSED UP!!! and I'm LOVING it!!! I love psychological stories like this but on this one, I'm not really satisfied. Maybe because it was so short that I wanted to know more what happened next like if the uke can escape or maybe he's stuck there forever. The ending is hinting the latter option would likely to happened but the story just suddenly ended it right there that I was like, that's it!? really?? Also, there were parts where the seme kinda felt guilty so I was hoping that maybe he would eventually stop but thanks to his psycho mother, it seems unlikely to happen now. But still, I want more!! I'm not satisfied with this 7 chapters only!! Overall, I actually like the idea of the story and maybe because I like psychological stories so it's a plus for me but the climax part where the uke found out the truth about the seme, it seems very anticlimactic. I was hoping the seme would put more act to it but that part felt rushed for me so I don't really feel any chills or something like usual psychological stories have. Maybe because the seme is kinda reluctant at first and also it's his first time to be this so obsessed that's why he's sloppy at his job lol. I was also hoping that they would show the uke trying to escape but keeps failing so that the seme would really go berserk and do more psycho things but nope, they just gave us rape seggs (-_-) But the seggs is really hot though even though it's rape. Probably because the art is so good and the characters look so fine. I just wish there were more chapters cuz I'm still not really satisfied. We are already now on the exciting part where the uke can no longer walk so why just stop there!?? It's getting interesting! so why stop!?? >.<
Juuyoku no Chigiri
I don't think I can read this again cuz the story is just so sad and depressing!! It's only good for one-time read only. It's just so sad because they could have been in a poly relationship but the other one betrayed them!! He become desperate and because of that, he lost both of his only 2 friends and ruined the relationship they have for so long. I felt really bad for both MC and the guy who died first because imagine, seeing the person you love gets gang raped and you can't help but just watch and what's more? your trusted friend turned his back on you and killed you! leaving that as your last memory before you die and that's really fvcked up and depressing!! And to the MC, he got gang raped in front of his loved ones, lost someone he loves after the tragic event, and lastly, he found the ugly truth that it was his other trusted friend who killed his loved one! And because of the tension, he also killed his other friend which is the first man he killed ever since they became Yakuzas. That would leave a traumatizing mark in his life y'all as he keeps living. Losing the only 2 persons you only have just because of unrequited love and now, you have to keep living with that painful memory and eventually, ended up commiting suicide to fulfill their promise to stay the 3 of them together. That was, no doubt, a very painful story!! And that's enough for me lol. Actually, they could have been in a poly relationship if only that first guy didn't put pressure on tomatsu! Because based on Tomatsu, he already accepted that the uke likes the other and it felt like he would be fine just as long the 3 of them stay still together and I feel like it goes the same too for the uke that even though he's now dating the other, he wants the 3 of them to stay together. It's only the first guy who wants to leave with the uke! If only they could communicate, it could have work out!! :< Overall, I'm not really into this type of story. I just accidentally bump into this and I got hook with the rape!! And it made me curious what would happened next but now, I regret knowing lol. It's not really bad because it leaves an impression to me not to read this again lol. And in fact, I actually liked it probably because I love tragic stories lol but I think it's good. The rating is way too low!! probably because many readers dont understand tragic stories, tsk!! The plot is fine. I felt the tension and tomatsu is really sus and the art is good! The smut is also really good it makes me a lil hard lol. Not bad, deserve a bit higher rating like around 8.4/10.
Shinai Naru Omega e
IT NEEDS MORE CHAPTERS TO PROPERLY TELL THAT THIS STORY IS BEAUTIFUL!! Like really!! We need more chapters cuz that was too short!! I'm not satisfied yet! like how could you end the story in the most exciting part where they already have a child!!? I also have lots pf questions like what happened after the confrontation with the brothers? Did the older brother stop harassing them after that? Also, why the omega girl and the brother met in the end? are they friends or what? Also, how did the seme know that he feels the same way as the uke? when did it start? like there are still lots of questions that were not answered! This story lacks details because the chapters were way too short!! We need another volume please author-nim!!! Overall, I really like this one knowing that I only saw this by accident. When I first read this, I was really hook and thought that this is really interesting!! An omega hiding his true identity and an alpha who hates omegas in a master x servant relationship!! It started really good but in the middle around chapter 3, it's really confusing because everything happens so fast! And also, the development of the semes feelings towards the uke was portrayed really poorly. Like there should have more scenes between them having good time together to convince us readers that there's something sparking inside between them! That's why we need more chapters!!! Cuz that ending with them having a child is like a miracle!! That was a good ending but why so short??? Please have a side story or a sequel cuz I'm really invested in this. I WANT MORE OF THEM AS A FAMILY!!
Kimi ni Koisuru Hazu ga Nai
I'm actually kinda disappointed in this. Probably because I've read a comment that this one is so good that my expectations were kinda high and sadly, it didn't meet so I'm quite dissatisfied. It's actually good and a fun to read and also there are many lessons you can learned from this about relationships. My only problem would be, I'm not really satisfied so maybe have more chapters about them in a lovey-dovey relationship(?) Like I can't see myself re-reading this just because I miss them. It's not really bad cuz the plot is there and actually again, it's good. The art is also good, the characters were hot and interesting and I can totally relate to the uke like having doubts and negative mind because it's way too good to be true!! especially knowing that the seme is originally a straight guy and a very popular one at that. Overall, it's good but it's only a one-time read for me. Probably because there are many things shown here where I can relate as a gay person and maybe bcuz most of it are the sad ones that I can't dare to read it again cuz its too relatable lol and it hurts cuz it's really true. I totally understand why the uke act like that. Nonetheless, it was a fun journey with a lot of embarrassing stuff lol. Also, the characters are really handsome and the smut is really hot although I want more cuz that was just really smexy!! The plot is also good especially the sister! She's the real MVP here! I was just hoping that maybe in the middle that the story would take another turn and show more the uke's POV so we can understand him especially his unrequited love!! like it wasn't really mentioned when did he start liking the seme and why. Nonetheless, not bad.
Pink To Mameshiba
I don't know why but I REEEALLY LIKEE this type of story where the ukes secret got revealed and was blackmailed by the seme but of course, not all. It depends on the length of the blackmail. If it's too extreme like treating them harshly and rape then nope! But this one, the seme just tease him cuz he have some conflict between his idol brother and he's just lonely. Although the forced jack off he did to the uke is quite uncomfortable for me tho. Nonetheless, I still like this! I can see myself re-reading it cuz its cute and hot! especially when the seme kissed him during the concert!! I'm weak to obsessed guys like him lol! My only problem in this story would be the confession!! Like YOOOO!! I have to scan again the chapters cuz I'm confused! are they dating or not and since when? cuz I didn't see any confession at all!! I was really disappointed on that one because the confession is the climax part in every romance story y'know!! Also, I was quite nervous at first because I thought the seme have some bro-con relationship towards his brother lol (probably cuz I read too many incest stuff lol) but I'm glad it didn't turn out that way and I LOVE the brother!! He's interesting! I wish he has more screentime tho and I want him to make the seme jealous!!! hehehe Overall, I actually liked this. I would have rate it 4.2/5 tho because they didn't show the confession!! And I'm not satisfied yet with the ending! I want more!! The plot is interesting for me and I think it's good. The characters were also interesting and the uke is so cute and I like semes that are quite obsessed with their partners lol like getting jealous so easily XD and the art and smut is really good!! I just wish there were more chapters cuz I would definitely re-read this! And that public seggs at that park is GOLD!
Placebo (yaoi)