The Mating Season
I'm kinda disappointed in this one cuz the summary and the first few chapters looks quite interesting but as soon as the heat goes, I kinda dislike how the uke handled the situation. And as the story goes, I kinda find him annoying on how naive he is and jumping into conclusions! The seme looks hot tho and kind but he also made a yikes when he rape the uke and I also think that the rape problem wasn't taken so seriously and was just slide away so easily and I think it's really unnecessary!! Also the plot is not bad but there's still some holes in the story like when the seme said he already wanted to touch the uke even before he was in heat like where's the story behind it?? I also think the confession and the ending are anticlimactic and could've been done a lot better. As a couple, they didn't leave much of an impression to me although I kinda like the seme. Overall, the plot is not bad, the art is good, the smut is hot and the characters are not so bad but I wasn't really invested while reading this. Moreover, it's a good one-time read.
69 Street, Tomorrow Island
This is not that bad but can be done a lot better. Tbh, I was really disappointed on this one cuz I really like the idea of the plot and this has so much potential!!! If the story have more chapters and more laid out, this one could be a lot way better story to read!! The characters were interesting and likeable especially the seme, he's so adorable!! but their characters were all sooo underdeveloped and there's not much of a character development which is really dissapointing. The story ended so sudden too!!! as well as their development like Idk what to feel, their feelings towards each other didn't seem so believable cuz it felt so sudden. The art is really good tho and the smut is hot but I wish there were more chapters because I really do believe the potential of this story!!! Nonetheless, I still enjoyed reading it. I also lowkey wish to see the naked buff body of the beefy seme!! He would probably be so hot and sexy but they didn't show it!!! Ugh!! So sad. :< PS. I don't know why but somehow, this is giving me killing stalking vibes during the table sex lol probably because of the uke's expression and the eye bags lol
Eroman - Kami To Pen To Sex To!!
There were some good and bad points on this one. First, the pages per chapter is too short and I don't see any character development at all! If there's one, then it wasn't really that effective and the hospital scene, the smut there felt too rapey and I dont like the last couple at all!! The only fine one are the first couple and the glasses couple. Overall, it was fine but really disappointed. ---------------------- EDIT ----------------------------- THAT WAS A PRANK!! Myghad! Now that I've re-read this again, it wasn't that so bad like compared to what I commented earlier, in fact, it was very funny!! The first couple really got me, not gonna lie. I was mad cuz everything was happening so fast but then later on, it was shown that it was only their comic strip.... I feel so dumbfunded lol! That was very funny, I love it! The following next short stories were also good, the psycho seme in the hospital and the bully to lovers story, they were good but not really my cup of tea but it was fun to read. And then, the least story I like is the manager part, I like that the seme gets to bottom and its hot but the story is... it needs more spice. Overall, I kinda regret talking bad about this one cuz this one was very funny although the plot and the art isn't really my cup of tea, but it's still good to make you laugh and the smut is also hot!! Not bad.
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