Myllie1's manga / #Straight(6)

I loved the first story, hate that it was a one shot tho, the interesting part is how every one shot connects. Here is how these connections happens, I tried my best not to put anything important but the whole connection is the sun part of the Manga so... Yeah , this is a not spoiler free comment read at your own risk 1st- Regulus and Milan met in a summer camp as child where some weird things happens, but Regulus was able to understand and solve them thanks to his grandfather knowledge. 2- Young woman was engaged to a soldier who came back home blind and unable to walk anymore. She stays with him and meets another guy, whom she dated when he hears the soldier was dead. The other guy and her are Regulus grandparents. 3- A man raises pigeons who are able to turn into humans or to let some e specific people see their human forms. They were send to war, not all of them made through it so the man run away with Fluke, the pigeon, got hurt, Fluke went get help from one of the soldiers, the first person besides the man to see his human form. 4- Said soldier and others find a girl called Nina with powers to turn people into stone in a lower country after war, she becomes a prisoner and later one of the guards falls in love with her. Extra- Nina Grand daughter is Milan bride, Milan and Regulus are still friends, Regulus is taking care of Fluke, who's fluke, the pigeon, grandson. (my fujoshi side is telling me that there's some supernatural romance going to happen there hehe)

Too many hole sin the plots, late introductions, poor development on important things and too much blabbing about things that didn't matter. For the romantics it can be a fun ride, but I'm more of an action person and although there is some it just isn't enough to cover its flaws

The age gap really does not make any different. This one is promising. A good vibe for a raining afternoon read during the autumn probably.

Art is good, men look nice, the chick is utterly unnecessary, same for the Harem vibe going on surrounding her I kinda wanted a bit more of action and comedy and their everyday life… and evil aliens. The evil dudes in this jus look like the Earth Conquest Club from Binan Koukou Chikyuu Bouei-bu Love lmao Also Masha and the mew marks are much missed in this（/TДT)/ the weapons too!! The attacks relating to the weapons and all, ykow? Pudding Ring inferno! Ribbon Lettuce Rush!! Ribbon Mint Echo! Tokyo mew mew was my favorite mahou shoujo after Sakura Card Captor, and I love the idea of mahou Shounen but this feels too much like your everyday reverse Harem. I mean, in TMM is the same thing, from Aoyama to Shirogane and even Kishu, everybody was in love with Ichigo, Lettuce or even Fujiwara, but I feel like there was more, more action and drama and daily life stuff idk, it felt like it took a bit longer for every girl to accept they were a Mew, but I might just not remember all that well.