Myllie1's manga / #Mediocre(2)

Ah, this would've been so much more fun if it were just some dark humor, following the vibe of the first extra, it's not really a good work, I know they are kids but it's too childish even when I consider this. It was fun, tho, it's one of those weird works that are only fun to read because they are short, although I'd love to read this as a longer (40-50 chapters) work, with some depth or really, just a comedy version of this would be pretty nice.

This is undoubtedly a mediocre read. The art is pretty, but the panels are way too long even for an infinite screen, the fight scenes are convoluted and use too many movement indicators (wind, shakeness, strikes, blur) to the point where reading becomes a hard task. The author doesn't bother to properly tell the story of characters they introduce, just leaving them behind. Supposedly the MC saved a military ranked man or something but we never see him doing so, until it was mentioned later on it looked like he let the man to die. Also, big burly men are nice, but some pretty dudes will always be welcome. And the story feels like a continuous ending build-up, is like we are in the end of the bridge, almost reaching the last pre-chorus of a song. I get it, MC is OP so he keeps facing boss level opponents, but the setting of each fight feels, again and again, like final combats, so you feel compelled to just say "why isn't this the end yet?" I kept reading out of curiosity but it's not exactly enjoyable.