blueberry's manga / #Want to read(102)

The writing is so corny and aggressively mid LMAOOO reads like a lonely author’s self-insert (but very unsubtle ver.) I mean yeah, all he characters are sweet, but…ehhhhhhhhh the dialogue is so fkn mid

Ch. 10 - the author introduces too many characters at once and crams too much dialogue. Not only is it hella “busy” to read, a lot of the characters are bubbly, extroverted, unempathetic assholes. Seeing them bulldoze through conversations regardless of the other party’s obvious discomfort and/or refusals pisses me off so fkn much. Why are there so many annoying characters? And the ones that aren’t being actively annoying are passive pussy-ass bystanders that can’t speak up on behalf of their friend. Also, why tf are they making such huge deals out of bumping into each other…it’s obviously accidents, no malice was intended, and it healed fairly quick. Not like the MC or ML lost their limbs, why are they so endlessly guilty about the most trivial things? They worry about social situations like teenagers, like get over yourselves. Jimmy’s friends also gotta rot in hell, fuck those friendships that completely disregard his boundaries (though Jimmy’s also a massive pussy for being a doormat.) I pray the characters become better over time…ugh Ch 23 - MY FKN GOD EVERYONE EXCEPT FOR MAIN LEADS ARE RUDE OR SPINELESS DOORMATS IT PISSES ME OFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF the cast of annoying characters is getting so dense I’m starting to wonder if the author is just as annoying IRL…no sane person can come up with this many annoying dialogues. The author condenses so many narration into dialogues that the whole story sounds “noisy”. There can be so many dialogues converted into monologues or thought bubbles, but noooooooo everyone in the room just HAS to hear what everyone’s thinking… Ch 31 - MORE CHARACTERS?????? Does the author not fucking know how to work with the current cast??? Why do they need to add on more and more to keep the plot moving??? It’s such a cheap, amateurish and confusing way of storytelling

Ok starts off as absolute miseryporn and irredeemably horrible personalities, but…around 50 chapters in it seems the author’s trying to incorporate cute and humane moments to spark romance? They’re forcing it a bit Ngl lol but the angst and action is def fun. I feel like the author started switching directions with the personalities and character development partway in…like they wanted to start and end with the most horrible personas just to see the MC snap beyond oblivion, but partway through they’re like “wait that ain’t gonna work, guess I should start going the normie way” Smut’s pretty good, not the best but better than decent

Looks rly funny

Looks rly meta and funny