blueberry's manga / #Family issues(228)

4.5-5* Such respectful and stronk bois ;w; Love their dynamic so much The kid is also so cuteeeee I just love all the characters in this manga

Cute ;—; so cute ;—; Uke was a little pushy but really tried to carry his own weight, he was truly the definition of an eager and earnest youngster lol. Seme’s so niiiiiceeeee he’s so calm and accepting :’D Holds shit in a little too much tho LOL Uke’s father is the GOAT

What can I say, it scratches that itch. Very clever storytelling and super enjoyable Ending was wholesome yay

3-4*; pretty aight

MAD CUTE AND HILARIOUS, FUCKKKKKKKKKKKK

Story flow and pacing is uh…choppy. The meh translations definitely gave this story a more amateur and cringier vibe, worsened by the terrible stiff-ass art. The author couldn’t draw expressions past the mild stage to save her life LUL The plot is technically dark and explores lots of familial abuse, but the stiff art and dialogues took me out of the immersion :/ The character development was super meh too Lmao at the moment of confrontation b/w MC and Beiguang (2nd ML), MC jumped hoops to make a super specific psychoanalysis of Beiguang’s trauma. It was right cuz the author said so, but man that could’ve gone so wrong… A lot of conflicts, actions and their rationale (trauma backstory) just felt so shallow. It was essentially some deep topics explored in the shallowest manner possible, like the author read an intro psych textbook then drafted this story

Ngl the backstory don’t really make sense enough to explain seme’s behaviours but ehhhhhhhh ok ig Nice smut

Wonderful story! Strong MC, fleshed out side characters, perfect pacing, super engaging storyline, compelling conflicts, heart-racing moments, NOICE ANGST, etc etc MC’s habit of shutting down emotionally and talking robotically to those she hates strikes a strong chord lol This is an awesome tense read (with some alleviating comfort and fluff, but it’s more angst than fluff)

Had really nice potential plot, but as a one-shot things were severely limited (only tiny glimpse of tragic backstory lol) If it was longer maybe it’d be a nicer read? Awesome art (mediocre smut tho)