Yoru To Asa No Uta
Well written, good plot and character development Felt a little foreign lol Asahi was a brat ‘till the end tho, he matured a bit but was overall…annoying? Xd And lowkey pity Yoru for being so oblivious about how Asahi treats him, but eh. Whatever works for them I guess. Yoru’s obsession with Asahi screamed isolation tho (not by grooming, he did it to himself) so I’m having mixed feelings about this
I Found You, My Omega
Translation was pretty sucky. Not machine translated exactly, but they fk up tenses and pronouns (I swear they confused “you” and “I” in some panels Jesus Christ) Liked the uke’s angst backstory, but…where tf does the seme fit in all this Seme literally had half a page of justification for why he fell in love w/ the uke and the author just left it at that LOL smth like “his smile is cute and the way he talks is nice” <— the fkd up thing is that the author didn’t show the uke acting like this outside of his reminiscing moments. From the story’s present perspective, uke was a constant nervous wreck with anxiety monologues everywhere, and he never seemed to joyfully chatter away like the seme was imagining. Author spent too many pages building the angsty backstory lmao Romance was so stale cuz of this xd Angsty backstory and my personal fave type of archetype (fall from grace type) brought this up to 3*l
Fruit of the Tongue
Too much smut for there to be any kind of emotional anchor in the plot lol Had ok points of angst but could’ve been exacerbated with more struggles (uke just up and accepted all this LOL) and more dramatic expressions
LOVE MURDER BASKETBALL
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Murderer Llewellyn's enchanting dinner invitation
LOVE IT TOP NOTCH ANGST, PLOT WRITING, FLOW, AND SUSPENSE CHARACTERIZATION IS SO MMMMMMMMMM ANGST IS MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM WORTH REREADS (slow start tho so I might just skip to bookmarked chapters lol) Yeah great angst I can def reuse these yep Just finished it and man. It’s so beautifully poetic. I’m gonna cry brb
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