moody_bish's manga / #yaoi(88)

Talk about compact and cohesive ️ There are a few details glossed over but they dont have a that big of a role expect for fillers or spice. After reading long stories with unnecessary complicated details, this is very satisfying. ️

Ahh the joys of short yet fulfilling romantic story. It has the right amount of drama, sensuality, and romance.

Well, that's yaoi for you. There's the possesive yet indifferent lover. There's the possessive and romantic lover. Then the lively uke and the tsundere type of uke. But seriously tho, I dislike possessive yet indifferent/insensitive lovers. The least you can do is make sure your partner still get to achieve his dream even if you're obsessing over them.

Dragged out too much. Masa is the typical childhood friend who "loves" but never taking the step forward for that. He doesnt have that pitiful feel whom you hope to root for to be with the main character because he wasn't even treated as a rival. The push and pull between Tatsuya and Daichi wasn't executed well because it focused too much on the process but never really highlighting the moments of confrontation. Many unnecessary fillers as well

Oh look, Masa becomes a proper boyfie when he's confessed to. Sigh.

Hmm... Hyukjoon-ah... Love and hate are extreme emotions. You can't separate those two. Minseo, your mentality is really... Strong.

For one thing, Hosung is a good friend and I want read his story. It might be better than this

I feel bad for forgetting the main couple. It must have been the number of BL I've read after it HAHAHA. This is good read for understanding that betrayal is not a sign to stop loving or receiving someone else's affection. These couple are a sort of extremes of dealing with betrayal. While the uke is bitter, the seme hopes that something better comes after it. The uke wants the traitor to suffer while the seme wishes the traitor to achieve their goal for betraying them. It's also nice to see that even when the seme is trusting, he doesn't act like fool. He communicates his pain but act out on his love nonetheless. The uke is also self-aware of himself and, in his own way, shows how much he loves the seme even if he is insecure and anxious.

Judging the story alone, Junwoo deserved better but since his story is already written, I can only be frustrated of his past rather than his present. This is sensitive and though it is fiction, the element of flow and consistency is vital. One does not simply make it work through convenience. By the time, Wooyeon shares his own issue and Junwoo was given this vision of picking himself up... In order to chase after Wooyeon, I have lost my interest. The whole segment after was rushed and unnatural. But well, don't take my personal take on it as a spiteful response. I was simply disappointed at how the ending played out as a montage, dettaching itself from the dragged out scenes of their cohabitation.

This was kind of fun during my first BL experience. After reading more BLs with an actual plot, the lack of it makes this less substantial. Tomoya was here for show. Keigo was raped with no to little resistance which makes me laugh when Taise wants Keigo to let go of his pride. Come on, where was his pride when he was raped by you? Well at least the kidnapping part somehow made Keigo realized he like Taise (not just for the sex and rewards).