Wolfgang's manga / #kidnapping(2)

Ok this was a great idea for a horror/gore/smut/yaoi but it was horribly executed This wasn't written well at all. The panels were way too close together, too much text with little direction, and it was confusing more than scary imo. There characters weren't even given a set motive or a reason as to why they acted that way which is one of the main selling point of psychological stories. ngl I kinda laughed because there was no way I could take all this angst seriously. It's like the author tried to shove in as much as possible in a one shot which obviously didn't work. The art style was really good though and it fit with the theme. Sorry for getting heated but you had to know.

61 THIS is how you write a kidnapping/rape story and tie in backstories! This is way better than killing stalking imo. Kim Dohyun CONSISTENTLY tries to obtain his freedom and he never gives in to Jung Sungho, physically or mentally. I was honestly expecting stockholm syndrome but the way the plot is going is so much better than just a "love story". ok update: Dohyun in chapter 49 I fucking anyways- still love it because Dohyun's mental state managed to hold on for a significant period of time and even when he gave in to Jung he took into consideration all the other aspects of his life, it's not Jung who made him submit but rather he was so weakened and let down by those around him that he chose to indulge in the pleasure even if it's toxic. ugh I keep on talking about how yeah Dohyun isn't a pussy and all (unlike a certain bum cough cough) but there are a lot of other great elements to this story like their reasons behind their behavior, the plot pacing, and the character arcs.