- i rlly finished this in like a day
- ok lets start off with edna the mc bc I LOVE HER!!! she is so strong and independent! and she's been through so much ahhhh it makes me tear up!! she can be sweet sometimes but also a bad bitch especially with those eyes i wish her trauma/past was brought up a bit more realistically. it just seemed a bit brushed off when she confessed to eli and he was just like ok ig i expected it to be more dramatic bc she is where she's at bc of what happened in the past.
- edna seemed to fall in love fast maybe bc she didn't get much live growing up but it was a bit hard to get past the beginning chapters when eli basically raped her. it just didn't rlly sit well with me. i honestly wouldn't have been mad if she left eli to become queen or something even though they become a very cute couple later on.
- i feel like eli's past was also brushed off. i mean we do get a backstory but no check ups on how he is now. well he also isn't the mc so im not too sad abt it. besides the beginning i love the way he treats edna its soo cute.
- i wish we got to see the talk between edna and eli about her past bc it was a major plot point but it was disregarded
- the last 20ish chapters seemed a bit rushed like that one dude prepared for war for 3 years and it ended in like 2 chapters
Light & Shadow