animedfreak's manga / #half-rape(163)

I just liked the characters and their roles but the plot could use some work. It was cute and all and really liked the possessiveness of the seme but do expect a cliche plot line.

A vampire that can control tentacles.....? Odd, super odd. Like really really odd, can't hold a light to suspension there this time. Also, like uke got annoying for some reason? Story seemed like it would have volumes but turned out to have just 3 chapters.

OoO Ogaping mouth right now, that was great! But what was up with that closure? Not a good one. All the loose ends never got tied and all the tangles were left in the fray. If only there were more to explain what was really going on and Ryan's death wasn't in vain contrary to it being due to "old age".

Wow, wow! Woof woof! WHAT?! DONE?! WHAT?! The ending came too soon too rushed! Like the author was really inspired at the beginning but lost the motivation so quickly threw this scrap in! No no no no!!!! Give us more!!! This is so unsatisfactory!

WAH~? How could it end like this? Couldn't the author have let this be like the other ones?! Happy and predictable ending?! Didn't even get to see a full on love story!!! No strong background or character growth, gah!!!! Truly disappointing!!!

Cheers to their newlywed lives! I just love the main couple and the side couple! And um no, just no for redemption for the ugly ho that divorced Dojun's brother, just no

Both stories were really cute even though the first one was incest..... That was off for me but if you overlook it in this one, its not too bad.

Wow I had not real expectations for this but did it turn out different, yes. I thought Gran was gonna have his own story but guess not, also felt like the uke should have had more camera time on expressing why he felt the way he did with the seme. Totally skipped the alien couple, seemed uninsteresting.

That was...Pretty darn good, not gonna lie. Just hated that the uke got gang-banged sadly and the seme didn't save him fast enough unfortunately and that's where it gets realistic, when the uke just goes back to scening with the seme like a tragic PTSD event didn't just occur. Alls well that ends well I suppose. Also, what's the story on the nipple piercing? And where was the seme guy going all those times he left the uke in the hotel? Was it him trying to sell the car and that's why he kept leaving the uke in the hotel? So many questions unanswered and the possibility of adding sweetness to the plot.

Theres jist some violent scenes in here, I don't mind but I've just reread this on the account that I always forget to do a review for this story, been about my 5-6th time. Its okay, super loyal dog that has am intelligence and mannerism of his own. Hardcore yakuza that soon learns to love the uke.