The story was good, though there's one thing I have an issue with, which is the fact that the ending was very dubious with whether or not the FL ended up with her teacher romantically. They have a 16 year age gap between them and the story starts off with the FL as a 13 yr old girl with her teacher, obviously, an adult and looking after her in a way as an adult does a child, so I have a big issue with the fact that he never explicitly turned her down and set her straight later on in the story when she was grown after he watched her grow up half of the time. It felt icky reading the later half of the story because of that.
Broken Melody