Access All Areas
I actually pretty like it. It’s an interesting and unique story, but some stuff needs to be explained a bit more. The dreams and the ending should’ve been more thought out in my opinion. The dream needed to be explained more because how did no one think that was extremely weird. The ending needed more info cause it was ended a abruptly. Also everyone stopped talking??? That needs a little more to it. Overall I kinda really like it even tho it has some problems it needs to fix. I just liked this a lot on an emotional level. So that kinda made me ignore the “mistakes” in it. Also.. THE BROTHER?!!! HWAT like did we just forget about that and what that psychopath did to him . Also the dad.. the whole family has issues that no one seemed to clear up
Tale of the Yellow Dragon