alrkitty's manga / #reincarnation(85)

The beginning felt full of cliches but I started getting into it more when we met the ml well he seems like the prime candidate after all he's the only guy not pursuing mia and wasn't in the novel well his real self wasn't. The blond guy visconte. They seem like a good match I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next.

An interesting story but I feel like a lot of info is being skipped or not mentioned. I tried finding the novel but the only one I found was to chapter 11 which is behind the manga so I figured I'd just read this instead after all the main guy looks super cool. Though certain things keep being redundant making me feel like no shit Sherlock obviously you have to take the quest if I remember correctly they originally said if you fail a quest you die things like getting revenge on aria how do you even forget that it was your resurrection condition if I remember correctly. I just had a bunch of those moments where I wondered if they just think I'm stupid or maybe the author forgot or are they translation errors. I don't know if I'm just remembering wrong but it wouldn't be the first time an author changed something because they decided they want it to work differently or they just forgot they set this up differently though that doesn't usually happen in just 12 chapters??? Oh I just remembered another one At one point his helmet was supposed to give him +100 health but it's mentioned as plus 3 every time after?? He's supposed to get attacked by NPCs if his face is seen but in the next region at the guild his helmet shows his face to the guild leader unless that's the artist's mistake. Which should have got him attacked. ...should I even mention it's an interesting mechanic to use a helmet to get out of all the negative penalties to pking. It's almost as if it's not a penalty most people in this game where helmets. What I mean is in most games NPCs can just detect your status the fact the gm have said your bait to everyone now until your status is gone. Well unless your wearing an item that's supposed to hide that status but I don't remember that helmet coming with that extra condition. So I guess they made this game more realistic and as long as they can't see your face they can't tell you have that status .....hmmm but what if you were class that never showed their face would that be fair? I don't know like ninja does half face count? Okay maybe I'm getting to much into it but all the same his face was seen shouldn't he have been attacked? Tag: cool, also hot looking guy would make a good tag ^_^ Edit: ah sad he covered up his handsome body with a leather outfit now I have to watch him be badly dressed. Such a shame I don't get to see his sexy body now. Hmm would a witch doctor normally wear something like that seems unlikely to me. Another edit: ever since his class upgrade I've felt like their speeding through the story it's hard to keep up with what's going on and I can't help but feel like their turning the story into a harem I'm hoping I'm wrong there. One he responded to a girl by blushing and 2 the newest girl felt like she wasn't there because of story but because they wanted to give him another girl the past girls worked in context this one screams harem to me. Sigh. I just feel the spd up in story is making the story less interesting though my favorite is his new outfit he even swishs the tail sexy and adorable.

Super cute and adorable.

I would tag this also as hot guys/magic/psychological. Though most psychological stories have really dark connotations and I feel this is lighter but it's hands down multiple personality disorder and trauma. I really like this story though I wonder which side of him she'll fall more for? I like his night self more and I feel she has more chemistry and connection with him but Something about his day self also appeals to me though he's not my type to much of a rabbit. I do wonder if in the end he'll combine into one or if as she said one personality will become dominant? Or will one be eliminated? Or will she be with both in the end? Or will someone else win hmmm?

I like the story. The first 30 chapters have a good translation then lala manga made a worse one but it's legible for the most part I've seen way worse. Chapter 91 is missing though, it's chapter 92. There were only a couple locations where I was clueless on what they were trying to say because the sentences made absolutely no sense (meaning they were the totally wrong words that even if you try to reword it's still makes no sense because it's absolutely the wrong translation) but the pages above and below made sense and from the pictures you can figure it out. honestly the missing chapter if you take context clues you can basically figure it out what happened. There were a couple chapters where I had to do some major rewording to make them make sense but for the most part it was mild rearranging. I only brought it up to clarify what kind of translation this is. When I read what everyone said on how bad the translation was it made me not want to read because I didn't want a headache but it's legible. And in my opinion a pretty good story it does remind me of a couple other stories and the very beginning felt a bit rushed like because I've read those others I felt they could have established their master student relationship better before killing him off it would have made his upset more emotional for us. It's not till he comes back and you see their dynamic that you really start getting into the story well that's my opinion. I felt like that happened because the author originally wanted to make chapter one a prologue or promo but then changed their mind and turned it into a dream...that apparently he has no memories of sense the exact scenario happens but he makes no mention of it hence why I came to my conclusion. I feel like the other stories I'm thinking of probably did their stories better though maybe not their translations but I strangely feel like this is the happy version of those stories the ones I'm thinking of are pretty tragic to the point I honestly was scared they would never end up together but in this one every time you think something bad or tragic will happen they resolve it or it just doesn't stick. Like they will either come back to life chase after them or something they don't leave you hanging long and always seem to resolve the conflict quickly. Including emotional conflict. I was honestly surprised sometimes by how quickly an emotional conflict was solved but I didn't feel like it didn't work. Like instead of being emotionally disturbed for ten chapters he up and chases after him even into another dimension I'm like dang sure we should all do that. It's so much better not to mention the master isn't into miscommunication so he solves those pretty quickly. So maybe it's the teacher why this story feels happy and not tragic. Though I do wonder if the author is going to change their mind and kill one them off for good and make me cry. That'd be sad.

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