alrkitty's manga / #age gap(116)

...this can't be complete he never accepted the proposal it doesn't feel complete the seme never got to have his worries go away after two yrs all the angst still feels like it's there and feels like nothing was resolved and it felt abrupt. This also feels borderline shounen ai All the issues at the beginning are still there at the end it would have been better if they had showed how they fell in love instead of describing it as almost blah blah and so now we're together...I was like seriously. Also the resolution after two yrs was absolutely needed. Also the side story about the other author would have been cool especially if it was with the brother.

its cute though they didn't take the story as far as I wanted. I really liked it regardless.

The first story is more shounen ai than yoai after all you see nothing in the least. Now the second story kind of shocked me after the first because it goes straight into a graphical sex scene.

I like the second couple better they are both semes. now the 3rd story that's unrealated to the first I wasn't interested in reading.